more streetwire stuff

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 Hello,
 
-This is a one off email to let you know about a new website I've built on top of PlanningAlerts: http://www.streetwire.org
+This is a one-off email to let you know about a new website I've built that's a bit like Planning Alerts: http://www.streetwire.org
 
 StreetWire is like PlanningAlerts for every kind of local information. As well as planning applications, it will tell you about licensing applications, crime, events and local news near you.
 
-You can also share news with your neighbours, so If you know some little tipbit of local news, or want to tell your neighbours about an event it helps connect you with your neighbours.
+You can also share news with your neighbours, so if you know some little titbit of local news, or want to tell people about an event, it helps connect you with your local community.
 
-You can signup here:
+You can sign-up here:
 
 http://www.streetwire.org
 
-I hope it's useful, it would be really great to here what everyone things of it, and what sort of information you'd like to see.
+I hope you find this useful. It would be really great to hear what you think of it, and what sort of information you'd like to see.
 
 All the best,